all the instruments work
trust me, i'm a harshass critic. even though you didn't use many different leads, you still got the 'personality' of the song across. the name helps too...gives you something to visualize. the synth at 1:51 is well-made, if it's not a preset.
also, nice hi-hat! most people screw those up
Nice to see some input. :) The synth there is just a 3xosc sine with some portamento. And man. I spent so much time on those hihats. It's a headache to get a good percussion flow when you use 4-4 beat unless you want to settle for the house cliche.
critique
overused the synth blast at the beginning, good chord progression, work on your mastering
nice arps. if you made those, good job
not my taste, but congratulations
wow... was made 5 years ago and still getting listened to? Everything I have on here is so newb heh. Should busmit something new that isn't terrible :)
But thanks for the review... oh and this stuff is edited/mixed by me from a Jason C pattern for "NewStuff"
not my style
percussion was good, although sometimes the synths were a little bit harsh in my opinion
maybe EQ it down and raise the volume
well made
I has Recon armer.
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